The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates three feasible locations for a leisure centre.
Overall
, what stands out from the map is that the place is in the countryside.
Moreover
, the locations are
further
from each other. A and B have an old building situated in the area, a factory and an old apartment ,respectively. In more detail, point A which is located on the eastern side of the land was previously a factory. Beside it is a river flowing from the east to the centre of the map. Point B is surprisingly a residential area. The area is along the road that starts from the south
going
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and goes
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to the north.
On the other hand
, point C is on the opposite side of A, it resides on the western part of the map. It is an empty land surrounded by trees. It is isolated and is
further
from the road.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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