The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The data illustrates the income of secondary school teachers in 2009 from five various
countries
.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that salaries from different countries
vary. While
,
Luxembourg accounts for the highest pay, Australia is the lowest.
The starting pay for high school teachers in Luxembourg is 80,000 which is the highest compared to the other 4 Remove the comma
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countries
and will continue to increase and will reach 119,000 after 15 years
of service. Whereas
, Korea and Japan's starting pay is not that far from each other. About 30,000 and 34,000 respectively. However
, after 15 years
Japan's salary doubled while
Korea's increased by just over 10,000.
On the one hand, Denmark and Australia have a shorter year to reach their maximum salary average in less than 10 years
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however
the pay plateaued at 54,000 in Denmark and 48,000 in Australia ,respectively. On the other hand
, the rest of the countries
need at least no less than 30 years
of service to reach the highest peak of their salary.Submitted by Anneya
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