IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5.5

The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last decades. Without it our lives would be completely different. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

#internet #invention #decades #lives
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The
internet
Use synonyms
in
Correct your spelling
is
show examples
 the most significant invention of the
last
Linking Words
 decades and it has made our
Use synonyms
lifes
Correct your spelling
lives
 easier than before,
human
Capitalize word
Human
show examples
 beings will not be able to live without
Use synonyms
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
show examples
 in modern societies. There are some advantages and disadvantages
about
Change preposition
of
show examples
this
Linking Words
 innovation and
about
Change preposition
apply
show examples
the changes wich it has
done
Verb problem
made
show examples
 to
peoples
Change noun form
people's
show examples
Use synonyms
lifes
Correct your spelling
lives
show examples
 that
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
 am going to discuss
about
Remove the preposition
apply
show examples
in
this
Linking Words
 essay.
To begin
Linking Words
, the
internet
Use synonyms
 has
done
Verb problem
given
show examples
 a huge help to
people
Use synonyms
 and made their
Use synonyms
lifes
Correct your spelling
lives
show examples
 more simple and faster. Nowadays, you can almost do all of your
paper works
Correct your spelling
paperwork
show examples
 faster by using the
internet
Use synonyms
.
For
Linking Words
example
Add a comma
,example
show examples
 you can open a bank account online, you can book hotels or cinema tickets and you can
also
Linking Words
 order food by using the
internet
Use synonyms
 and online application. The
internet
Use synonyms
 has made the education process so much faster too,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
teachers
could
Wrong verb form
can
show examples
 teach
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
students by using applications
such
Linking Words
 as
skype
Capitalize word
Skype
show examples
 or google meet from their houses and they
dont
Correct your spelling
don't
 even have to go to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
schools or universities, there are
also
Linking Words
 a lot of online books that students can buy in cheaper prices and they can use them to learn their
leasons
Correct your spelling
lessons
 and they
dont
Correct your spelling
don't
 have to buy them
physicaly
Correct your spelling
physically
.
Moreover
Linking Words
, the process of doing everything online in harming the
indivisuals
Correct your spelling
individuals
individual
Use synonyms
lifes
Correct your spelling
lives
show examples
 in many cases.
For example
Linking Words
, it is making
people
Use synonyms
 lazy and they usually do not have enough exercise during their day.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, it is
effecting
Correct your spelling
affecting
show examples
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
friendships and making some
people
Use synonyms
deppresed
Correct your spelling
depressed
due to
Linking Words
 the
onilen
Correct your spelling
online
onion
realationships
Correct your spelling
relationships
 and because of that
people
Use synonyms
 see their friends in person less than before. In conclusion,
while
Linking Words
indivisuals
Correct your spelling
individuals
 are using the
internet
Use synonyms
 more than before, there are not a lot of things that we can do about the disadvantages of using
this
Linking Words
 invention, because it has changed our lifestyles a lot and it is hard for
people
Use synonyms
 to quit using it, we should enjoy the advantages of using the
internet
Use synonyms
 and try to not get used to it.
Submitted by shima.majidansari on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: