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the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.

the chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five australian cities.
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This
 bar chart depicts a
survay
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survey
about
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of
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 drinking habits and people’s
coffee
 and tea buying in five cities in Australia: Sydney,
Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaida and Hobart. It is clear from
this
 graph that
these
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those
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 who visit
a
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coffee shops
a coffee shop
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coffee
 shops represent
higher
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a higher
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 ratio.
According to
 what is shown, the
proporton
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proportion
 of people
whose
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who
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 went to a cafe to have a
coffee
 or tea in
Melbourne
account
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accounts
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 for around 64% of the people who
live
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lived
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 in the city in the
last
 month,
while
 the lowest
persentage
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percentage
 is Adelaide about
the
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apply
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half.
On the other hand
, the ratio of Hobart’s residents
bought
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who bought
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 instant
coffee
 in
last
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the last
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 4 week represent less than 55% and it is the same range for
Melbourne
.
However
, buying a
frish
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fresh
fish
coffee
 in Sydney and
Melbourne
 is between 45 per cent and 40 per cent.
Meanwhile
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,Meanwhile
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 the other cities stand for less than 40 percent of the people who bought a fresh
coffee
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, melbourne with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • preference
  • beverage
  • caffeine
  • demographics
  • trend
  • survey
  • cultural significance
  • habit
  • seasonal variation
  • health consciousness
  • availability
  • implications
  • urban vs. rural consumption
  • data interpretation
  • quantitative analysis
  • fluctuations
  • patterns
  • peak times
  • economical impact
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