The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.

The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line chart displays the
amount
of new and closed markets in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, the biggest
number
of closing
shops
was in 2014,
while
the least
number
was in 2015.
Besides
, the biggest
number
of
shops
opened was in 2011,
however
, the fewest
number
of
openings
was in 2018. The
number
of
openings
was more than the
closures
at the beginning of the period as their quantities were 8500 and 6500 respectively.
Then
, the
number
of both types of
shops
declined as the
number
of
openings
had a bigger decrease compared to the
closures
in the next year. After that, the
number
of
openings
jumped by 50% of its current
amount
for the next two years,
however
, the
number
of
closures
fluctuated insignificantly during
this
period. In 2014, the
amount
of opening and closing was almost equal to 6000
shops
. Next year, both relative numbers dropped dramatically as the first one reached half of the initial
number
and the later one reached below 1000.
Then
, the
number
of opened
shops
increased insignificantly,
whereas
the
amount
of closed
shops
increased by five times its previous value for the next two years. For the
last
year, the
number
of
openings
declined by one-fifth of its previous
number
,
while
the
closures
stayed the same.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, number, shops, openings, closures with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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