The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The line chart displays the
amount
of new and closed markets in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Overall
, the biggest number
of closing shops
was in 2014, while
the least number
was in 2015. Besides
, the biggest number
of shops
opened was in 2011, however
, the fewest number
of openings
was in 2018.
The number
of openings
was more than the closures
at the beginning of the period as their quantities were 8500 and 6500 respectively. Then
, the number
of both types of shops
declined as the number
of openings
had a bigger decrease compared to the closures
in the next year. After that, the number
of openings
jumped by 50% of its current amount
for the next two years, however
, the number
of closures
fluctuated insignificantly during this
period.
In 2014, the amount
of opening and closing was almost equal to 6000 shops
. Next year, both relative numbers dropped dramatically as the first one reached half of the initial number
and the later one reached below 1000. Then
, the number
of opened shops
increased insignificantly, whereas
the amount
of closed shops
increased by five times its previous value for the next two years. For the last
year, the number
of openings
declined by one-fifth of its previous number
, while
the closures
stayed the same.Submitted by zbafshar92 on
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