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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after f inishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after f inishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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These graphs depict Anthropology graduates from one university after finishing their undergraduate degree course and their salaries after five years.
According to
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 what is shown, the destination of Anthropology graduates constitute approximately half of them in full-time work and the full-time postgrad study accounts for the quarter,
whereas
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, the lowest ratio goes to half-time by 5 per cent. In terms of the incomes of Anthropology after five years' work, the majority of government sectors take 100 thousand,
however
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, freelance consultants, the quarter take less than 75,000,
while
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 those take between 74,999 and 25,000 in private companies represent 55%, though others take less than that

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