the chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. the table shows the percentage in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. summarize the information and make acomparison.
The chart below illustrates the proportion
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different types of exports from 2015 to 2016. The table compares the rates of each kind of export in that period.
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Overall
, that can seen that all exports have the same trend of growth,petroleum products ,Engineered goods,Gems and jewellery, Agricultural ,and Textiles.
Regarding the chart we can observe that , all of the categories have a slight increase at the beginning of the period , However
,all of them started at 6 billion and during one year the figure not
change expectations for Textiles which goes down to the end at 25% billion.
On the other ,hand the table information shows thatAdd a missing verb
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the value percentage is changing
From 2o15 to 2016 , that clear in Textiles in 15.24 Remove the comma
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whereas
, the petroleum products was declined
to 3,Submitted by Ssaraan2017 on
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