Task 2 Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for child of having a large number of toys?

Nowadays, all over the world, the topic of buying a large
number
of
toys
for
children
is omnipresent.
While
some
parents
think the advantages of buying a large
number
of
toys
, others
parents
think there are disadvantages for kids to have
access
of
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a large
number
of
toys
. In my point of view, I think both perspectives are valid, for the reasons discussed below. On the
one
hand, as far as buying a large
number
of
toys
for their
children
is concerned,
firstly
, to some extent, especially in modern times, no matter where in the world you live, they can have
access
of
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to
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a variety of
toys
due to
the fact that the
parents
buy every
things
for their kids, leading to discovering every universe
such
as Marvel, Medicine game, tools hands game and so
one
.
In addition
, they should spend more time with their
toys
due to
the amount of it resulting in the fact that the
parents
have more free time for themselves.
On the other hand
, there are reasons for offering a large amount of
toys
for their kids has disadvantages. First and foremost, by and large, when
children
have
access
to many
things
, they cannot take care of
toys
owing to the fact that the toy is broken, they just need to change it.
Secondly
, and most importantly for me, they cannot learn the value of
things
because of having every
things
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they want.
For example
, if a child has just
one
toy, he will take care of it,
instead
of the kid
has
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having
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access
to many
toys
, if he breaks
one
, he will change it and play with another
one
. In conclusion,
while
some
parents
think the advantages of buying a large
number
of
toys
for their
children
, others say that buying
a large numbers
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a large number
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of
toys
has disadvantages.
However
, in my opinion, both perspectives are
value
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for the reasons discussed above.
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