Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach

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fast expanding, People now think that we should turn to genetically modified to increase the production of food grains. In

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essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.

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with the pros, Now

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times in many provinces have evolutated and used the forming land for industries, multistorey buildings, and malls for public facilities, so

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left less agricultural land for forming. To elaborate, the former are making extra efforts in farming but

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are not fulfilling the needs of the nation. We need genetically modified

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, so require less water and less land.

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, as per a survey by BBC News, Today is pot forming very famous in Italy, and people are ready the garden at home as per requirement.

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, citizens are eating fresh and organic vegetables and fruits.

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, every things pros and cons.

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has a major effect on soil deformation and

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an allergic reaction in the human body.

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, when they use modified

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they extra use chemicals.

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the Times of India news, report Genetically modified

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fulfil the production requirements but they need more pesticides.

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major illnesses, like cancer, blood pressure, skin problems, and so many diseases. In conclusion, Genetically modified

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were a good development at that time for food grains industries but they

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had some effects on people’s health. Senctisit will be trying to develop these types of

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with no need for pesticides.

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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that parents should tell stories or read to their children. However, others believe that these days this isn’t necessary as children have so many other sources for stories, such as books, films and TV. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of being self employed?

Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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