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Populations in developing nations are rapidly growing, people now believe that we should turn to GM crops to increase the production of food grains. Discuss the Advantages and Disadvantages of this approach

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Last
 few decades, the public in successful countries
is
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 fast expanding, People now think that we should turn to genetically modified to increase the production of food grains. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages.
To begin
 with the pros, Now
this
 times in many provinces have evolutated and used the forming land for industries, multistorey buildings, and malls for public facilities, so
then
 left less agricultural land for forming. To elaborate, the former are making extra efforts in farming but
results
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 are not fulfilling the needs of the nation. We need genetically modified
seeds
, so require less water and less land.
For example
, as per a survey by BBC News, Today is pot forming very famous in Italy, and people are ready the garden at home as per requirement.
Thus
, citizens are eating fresh and organic vegetables and fruits.
Furthermore
, every things pros and cons.
This
 has a major effect on soil deformation and
also
 an allergic reaction in the human body.
In other words
, when they use modified
seeds
 they extra use chemicals.
For instance
,
according to
 the Times of India news, report Genetically modified
seeds
 fulfil the production requirements but they need more pesticides.
Hence
, many thousands of people prey
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 major illnesses, like cancer, blood pressure, skin problems, and so many diseases. In conclusion, Genetically modified
seeds
 were a good development at that time for food grains industries but they
also
 had some effects on people’s health. Senctisit will be trying to develop these types of
seeds
 with no need for pesticides.
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