The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
The picture illustrates the progress of two kinds of different cutting equipment in the Stone Age.
Overall
, it shows the evolution of cutting tools that were used a million
years
ago. Showing the 3 views (front, side and back view
). Moreover
showing the similarity in size of both tools from different ages.
On the one hand, it shows that 0.8 million
years
ago the stone used was chiselled into a thin sharp object with a pointy end at both sides. The front view
depicts a round rough stone while
the back view
is flat and smoother ,furthermore
the size was 5cm in height, the same size as the tool used 1.4 Add a comma
,furthermore
million
years
ago.
On the other hand
, Tool A invented 1.4 million
years
ago looks a little more refined than the previous one. It was smoother, thicker and was in a triangle shape. Its back view
was flatter in contrast
with the front view
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