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These days, we cannot compeletly trust to the pictures. To what extent do you agree or disagee?

#trust #pictures #disagee
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recent years, because of the improvement of
technology
 and the newest types of that, we cannot completely trust
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the reality of
photographs
.
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,
in
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 the past few years,
photographs
were
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 used to publish
the
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real
pictures
 of
individuals
, places and nature.
Although
 there are some negative aspects in the case of
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editing
 and
reframeing
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reframing
refraining
photographs
, I personally believe that it is a positive development. On the one hand, because of the
technology
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improvements
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 some
individuals
 believe that
photographs
 are
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untrustable
.
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 in the
technology
 generation forced
individuals
 to do all of their personal
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 with
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 internet connection. There are some Job seeking-
applications
 and social media ones for finding appropriate job opportunities and finding relatives and close friends to have
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 on-screen connection with them. In
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 cases,
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editing
pictures
 and
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 fake ones could lead to some serious problems.
For instance
, it can lead to
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 level of confidence among the
individuals
 who follow the folks who
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share
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fake
photographs
.
Moreover
, sharing unreal
pictures
 in some academic
applications
such
 as Linkedin could manipulate
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companies and waste their time.
On the other hand
,
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 are many
programmes
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programs
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 for
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editing
pictures
 which are taken by advanced- cameras and mobile phones,
such
 as
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 and Edit-photograph
applications
.The usage of
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these applications
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 is simple, so the users
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 not
require
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 to allocate a lot of time
for
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edditing
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editing
 their
pictures
.
For example
, For fulfilling the Lottery application, every
individuals
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 should
uploade
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upload
 the
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 and clear
pictures
from
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 themselves. These
applications
 not only could help to re-size and re-frame the
pictures
 in a short time
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 but
also
 could help to save the amount of money which photographers would take
them
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for
edditing
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editing
 their
pictures
. In conclusion, because of the improvement of
technology
 and the vast
numbers
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 of
applications
, people can edit the size, shape and
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reality of the places
as well as
 their make-up and appearance
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 their
pictures
.
Although
 there are some negative aspects
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this
 trend, I believe that the positive ones overweight the negatives.
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