The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
The bar graph illustrates the duration of hours every teacher spent teaching in various schools (Primary, Secondary and Upper Secondary) in four countries (Japan, Spain, Iceland and
USA
).
Correct article usage
the USA
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that in all countries, upper secondary has greatest
duration of time spent learning compared to the other levels, Change the article
the greatest
while
primary is the shortest.
In more detail, upper secondary in the USA accounts for the longest hour spent teaching at under 1200H ,respectively in contrast
Japan has the shortest hour at over 600H. On the other hand
, Spain and Iceland hovered around 900H.
Moreover
, in lower secondary the USA still has the longest time at over 900H while
the rest of the nation spent their hours teaching at around 600H. Additionally
, in primary the
Iceland surprisingly has the shortest figure for both at under 600H Correct article usage
apply
whereas
the other nations provides
at least over 600H for the 2 levels.Change the verb form
provide
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