The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurents between 2003 and 2013 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the Americans who ate fast
food
in restaurents
over a period of ten Correct your spelling
restaurants
years
2003 to 2013.
Over all
, the number of times that American Correct your spelling
Overall
people
went to fast food
restaurents
Correct your spelling
restaurants
were
the highest in once a week in 2006, and twice a month in 2013. Change the verb form
was
Moreover
, the least
Correct word choice
lowest
percent
in eating junk Replace the word
percentage
food
was on everyday
Replace the word
every day
among
the Change preposition
over
years
.
In USA
, the number of Correct article usage
the USA
people
whon prefered
to eat fast Correct your spelling
who preferred
food
both once a week and twice a month were
the same Change the verb form
was
percent
with 30% Replace the word
percentage
in
the number of Change preposition
with
people
who enjoyed eating fastfood
with 5% and less. Correct your spelling
fast food
Also
, less than 4% of people
frequency was on Change noun form
people's
everyday
in 2003, and 3% in the Replace the word
every day
years
2006, and 2013.
Further more
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
American
who went a few times Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
have
the same Wrong verb form
had
percent
in both Replace the word
percentage
years
2006 and 2013 with 15%.Submitted by insighttribez on
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