The flow chart illustrates the consequence of deforestation. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The data depicts the negative effect of cutting trees in the forest.

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, what stands out from the data is that there are four different outcomes of deforestation and three of these results from the same event.

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, when trees are cut down it can lead to the compression of the soil

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the use of heavy logging equipment in which the soil becomes hard and baked. After which, rainwater can't be absorbed and

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will run off the earth which ends in flooding the nearby community.

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, fewer roots to hold the topsoil will

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cause soil erosion.

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, the risk of burning increases either deliberately or accidentally followed by the destruction of waste wood from logging, after that the food for the micro-organisms is lost.

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, the plants return less moisture to the air which

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leads to less precipitation,

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an increased drought.

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, the consequences of

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topsoil soil

erosion, loss of food for micro-organisms and increased drought are the moving in of pioneer species

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the degradation of vegetation

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leading to lesser biodiversity.

Anneya Mon Sep 11 2023

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "thus".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

flow chart
consequence
deforestation
process
cutting down
loss
forest cover
wildlife habitat
disruption
ecosystems
soil erosion
water quality
release
carbon dioxide
atmosphere
contribute
global warming
climate change

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