Imagine that you have become successful in any field you want. Make a short presentation of how you have achieved that.
Warm
welcoming
to all of you. I’m Dương Bảo Sơn, everyone often calls me Dr.Son. Replace the word
welcome
And my
major is Psychology. It’s my pleasure to be here and tell you my success key. It seems to me, there are 3 crucial factors to achieve your goals and become successful. First of all, you need to persist and be humble. Because if you persist, you will come through all harshnesses and difficulties. If you are humble, you will learn more new things and gain more worthy knowledge. Correct word choice
My
Second,
you have to try something right now. You can’t grasp the future but the present is over. Cross the bridge when you come to it and finally
, you need to stop comparing with others. The most important thing is you’re better than you were yesterday. You’re just be
yourself! And do whatever you are good at.Change the verb form
You’re just being
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite