Some people think TV is a good for us , while others argue that television has many disadvantage. Discuss both views.
With the advancement of technology, there are several ways to consume entertainment, like
use
of social media, surfing online and most Add an article
the use
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television
, which is the oldest form to have
fun. But recently Verb problem
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television
has become a point of debate whether
the consumption of Change preposition
as to whether
television
is good or bad. This
essay will discuss both views and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the first notion, there are murals of things to be shared. Firstly
, despite of
the increase of social media over different platforms, Change preposition
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television
is still the most preferable way to have pleasure because it relaxes the mind of an individual. For example
, a survey of the Times of India suggest
that around 80% of Change the verb form
suggests
audience
choose to watch Correct article usage
the audience
TV
rather than the other way of amusement. Moreover
, people can watch news
and learn about what is going on in the country and Add an article
the news
for
the younger audience, Change preposition
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they
can do daily shopping by watching the Correct pronoun usage
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product
on the screen. Fix the agreement mistake
products
As a result
, television
can be helpful in major
part of our lives.
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a major
On the other hand
, in today's time, most of
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the
young toddlers are just attached to the Correct article usage
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TV
and thus
it can have various side-effects like weaken
eyesight and many more . Wrong verb form
weakened
For instance
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spectacles at an early stage of Add the particle
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In addition
this
, children can become very lazy and furious because they are not comfortable doing their job on time. As a result
, children just waste the
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by
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TV
which even have
an adverse effect on Change the verb form
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body. Add an article
the human
Further
, they do not learn any value by watching it.
To conclude
, there are numerous drawbacks of watching TV
, but I strongly believe that, by watching television
, a person can be led from their busy schedule and can have fun.Submitted by ayush.s2352 on
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