The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
This
line chart depicts the yearly average consumption of cell
phones and residential phone
services
in the United States from 2001 to 2010. It is clear from the graph that, the utilization of cell
phone
services
rocketed bast in the last
ten years.
According to
what is shown, the consumption of the residential phone
in the first period was less than 700$ and decreased slightly to around 550 dollars in 2006 and become at the same point as cell
phones, but did not stop at this
range, it continued to dip until become 400$ at the end
of the period.
In terms of cell
phones, it was about 210$ in 2001 and started to grow gradually to about 770$ in 2010.
To sum up
, we could say that, there was a huge gap in the expenditure between cell
phone
services
and residential phone
services
at the beginning of the interval and also
at the end
of the year.Submitted by firasalfadda2 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cell, phone, services with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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