The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The bar chart illustrates how much money was spent on six products in
Britain
,France ,Italy and Germany
. Overall
Britain
consumed larger
amount Correct article usage
a larger
in
all the goods considered compared to Change preposition
of
other
three countries Correct article usage
the other
however
Germany
used the least cash.
It is observed that, in
photographic films, Change preposition
on
CD's
and toys, France spent more than Italy Change noun form
CDs
whereas
on other
three goods considered the expenditure is vice versa. In all cases, Correct article usage
the other
Britain
shows a significant difference in the money spent with other countries but in Tennis bats, cash
used by both Correct article usage
the cash
Britain
and Italy is almost same
. Italy's expenses on all the items are approximately from 150 to 155.
In France, the capital on Tennis equipment is the least and on movies is the greatest and In Correct article usage
the same
Germany
and finally
in Germany
the finances on
the pictures, perfumes and Tennis are Change preposition
for
same
and the highest, Correct article usage
the same
on the other hand
on toys and CD's
are equal and the lowest.Change noun form
CDs
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words britain, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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