The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure center. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates three projected spots for

planned

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the planned

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relaxing center.

Overall

, it is undeniable that

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spot

B is the most convenient place for recreational building,

whereas

spot

A seems to be noisy and polluted for relaxation

zone

To begin

, it can be seen that

spot

A is

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an industrialized

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district, where

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numbers

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of factories and huge chimneys are situated, making

this

zone

unacceptable for leisure activities.

In contrast

spot

C can be described as

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opposite of A.

This

is surrounded

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green forests and open fields, being

comfortable

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a comfortable

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zone

for recreation and recharging.

Finally

, there is a golden middle of A and C, which combine amenities and

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nature, separated by

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river from

spot

Moreover

, having a residential area makes

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preferable for people to have easy access to cafes and shops, relatedly, beneficial for

attract

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customers.

Thus

spot

B is considered

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a suitable

zone

for

location

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the location

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leisure

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the leisure

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center

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centre

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words spot, zone with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

156 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

amenities
accessibility
prospective
recreational facilities
infrastructure
proximity
pedestrian access
public transport links
green spaces
commercial area
residential zone
traffic congestion
environmental impact
urban planning
feasibility
demographics
footfall
zoning regulations
land use
catchment area

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