The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2010.
The chart gives the information about lowest percentage of preference was camping.
Looking into the details, hotel
varities
of Correct your spelling
variety
accommodation
opted Fix the agreement mistake
accommodations
by
the British on holiday trips in the year 2010. Change preposition
for by
Unit
of measurement is Percentage. Correct article usage
The unit
Overall
,highest
proportion of Add an article
the highest
people
chose hotel
in all the four regions and in England and Fix the agreement mistake
hotels
Whales
, Correct your spelling
Wales
Caravan
had the least proportion whereas
in Scotland and Nothern
IrelandCorrect your spelling
Northern
Correct article usage
the
stay
were nearly half the number in England and Scotland and around 40 Fix the agreement mistake
stays
percent
in Whales and Change the spelling
per cent
North
side of Ireland. Correct article usage
the North
Firstly
, In England, only 5% of people
used caravan
as their Add an article
the caravan
a caravan
accomodation
and around 10% enjoyed camping. In a similar trend, only Correct your spelling
accommodation
few
Change the article
a few
people
in scotland
stayed in Change the capitalization
Scotland
Caravan
and Camping.
However
, Caravan
stay was the second highest accomodation
in Northern Ireland. Correct your spelling
accommodation
Finally
, In Whales
approximately 10% of humans had their stay in Add a comma
,Whales
Caravan
and Camping which is 40% Correct article usage
a Caravan
lesser
than the figure of the Correct word choice
less
people
who took rest
in Correct article usage
a rest
hotel
.Correct article usage
a hotel
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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