The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

The line graph shows visit to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999. The bar chart shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
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The line graph illustrates the number of visitors that went abroad from the
UK
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and
visits
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to the
UK
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by foreign
residents
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in two decades from 1979 to 1999,
whereas
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the bar chart represents which countries
UK
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residents
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chose to visit more often in 1999. Units are measured in millions of people.
Overall
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, the number of
visits
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from the
UK
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rose dramatically and almost
pentadrupled
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quadrupled
over the period given,
while
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visits
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to the
UK
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increased gradually over two decades. In 1999, the most popular country to visit by the
UK
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residents
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was France. Regarding the line graph, the number of
visits
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abroad by
UK
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residents
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was roughly 12
million
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in 1979 and increased steadily to 20
million
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visits
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in 1985 and following that, it climbed speedily to over 50
million
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in 1999. At the same time,
visits
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to the
UK
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by overseas
residents
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moved upward more slowly. It began at around 10
million
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visits
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in 1979 and
then
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culminated at approximately 25
million
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in 1999. In terms of the most popular countries visited by
UK
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residents
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in 1999, both France and Spain accounted for just over 10
million
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and just under 10
million
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visitors respectively. The reverse is seen in the USA, Greece, and Turkey as they received just below 5
million
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visitors each.
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the USA accounted for nearly 4
million
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visits
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, Turkey had about 2.5
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, visits, residents, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Visit/visits
  • UK residents
  • Line graph
  • Bar chart
  • Trends
  • Inbound visits
  • Outbound visits
  • Comparison
  • Country-wise
  • Popular countries
  • Data visualization
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