Some people support the idea of imposing taxes on fossil fuels (oil, coil and gas) in order to reduce energy consumption. Other people disagree with this approach. Consider the debate and its arguments, and come to your own conclusion.

It is known that
society
is divided into two paradoxical attitudes.
While
some people believe that imposing
taxes
on fossil fuels is not necessary, I agree with those who think that
this
consequence must be applied
due
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to reduce energy consumption. I'm going to discuss deeply
this
topic
on
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my essay below. On the one hand,
it is clear that
by imposing
taxes
on oil,
coil
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coal
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ad
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and
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gas the consumers of
this
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these
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fossil fuels are gonna decrease rapidly, and
consequently
the energy consumption will. In my
opinion
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this
is the right way authorities should act, with the aim of avoiding many issues that characterise our
society
nowadays.
Firstly
, the use of fossil fuels increases the issue of climate change, which we are desperately trying to solve.
Secondly
, by affecting the climate it will
also
affect the
society
and other correlated aspects,
such
as global health, and so on...
On the other hand
, not everyone has the economic possibility to look for other sustainable options,
hence
, for what concern my experience, they disagree with the thesis I've just exposed in the previous paragraph. In
this
case
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applying
taxes
can be terribly harmful for their economic situation. One possible solution should be
apply
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taxes
to enterprises, that are not sustainable, or to the people who have a big availability in terms of money, and keep using gas
instead
of electricity.
To conclude
, I represent the part of
society
who
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agree
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agrees
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that
taxes
should be applied and I think that many solutions can be found in order to solve
this
problem.
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