the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram shows the procession of recycling
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, there are 9 steps in recycling, starting with people throwing recyclable plastic
into recycle
waste Wrong verb form
recycled
container
and ending with products which were made Fix the agreement mistake
containers
by
raw materials.
Change preposition
from
Firstly
, plastic
products after being used will be throw
into a recycle trash bin and will be collected by trucks. Change the verb form
be thrown
after
being added, these Capitalize word
After
plastic
bottles
will be transported to recycling before being sorted manually. Then
, these plastic
bottles
will be compressed into blocks before being crushed and wash
.
Wrong verb form
washed
Secondly
, once complete
all five steps above, the Correct word choice
apply
plastic
pieces will turn
into Wrong verb form
be turned
plastic
pellets by a special machine. After that, the pellets will be heated and shaped to become raw materials. These raw material
will be Change the determiner
This raw material
These raw materials
transfer
to Wrong verb form
transferred
factory
for particular uses Add an article
the factory
such
as:
producing Remove the comma
apply
recycle
Replace the word
recycled
bottles
, clothes, pencil
, Fix the agreement mistake
pencils
Correct word choice
and bag
bag
... and continue the Fix the agreement mistake
bags
recycle
process after being used.Change the verb form
recycling
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