In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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It is often believed by some certain individuals that printed

newspaper

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or books are not necessary anymore,

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other

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opine that

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the behaviour of "touching"

paper

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can have big consequences on our society. I'm going to discuss deeply

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topic in my essay below. On the one hand, for what concern my opinion, time has changed and evolution is going inevitably through our lives. Some years ago we only could read a book by buying it at the

book store

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or by renting it at the library, but either

way

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we couldn'

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choose: it was printed on

paper

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. Nowadays we are able to experience digitally many things that some years ago we couldn'

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even imagine.

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, the

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device was launched,

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the newspaper started to upload news online, and

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now we are able to read an entire book on our iPad or even

listen

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audio-book

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just by downloading an app.

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to all of

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, it is inevitable that in the future printing books or

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won'

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be a thing anymore, and

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won'

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affect negatively our generation, but elderly people

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will have big issues with their

life-style

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routine.

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, not only older generations

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but

bookstores

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also bookstores

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, libraries and many other shops

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sell

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this products

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will

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obsolete.

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Consequently

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this

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will cause a big lack of labour, and a crisis in the "

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/print sector" that must be solved in

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way or another.

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, I agree that in the future digitalised versions will be more common than printed ones, but I

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think that we must try to not avoid

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paper

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at all.

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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274 words

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their productss are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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