The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line chart displays the average fluctuation regarding the costs of
Copper
, Nickel, and Zinc per month.
Overall
, it is clear that
the price
of Nickel experienced the greatest decline during the period, while
Copper
had the least change in its price
.
To begin
with, in January, the cost of Copper
changed by 6% compared with the preceding month which was more than the other two metals. However
, its percentage
decreased to only 1% in March and remained the same for the following month. Yet, the changes regarding its percentage
fell dramatically to -3% by June. Then
, it rose to -1% in July and stayed steady for 3 months. Moreover
, after a slight fall, it rose significantly from -2% to 1% by November.
Concerning other items, Zink and Copper
accounted for almost the same percentage
in January, at 1% and 2% respectively. Although
the price
of Zinc had an upward trend at the beginning, and Copper
’s cost had a downward one, they became equal in June, at about -1%. Afterwards, Copper
’s price
inclined to 1% for the three next months, whilst Zink’s percentage
was just below 0%. Finally
, they were quite similar at the end
of the period, at roughly 2%.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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