The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line chart displays the average fluctuation regarding the costs of
Copper
, Nickel, and Zinc per month.
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Overall
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it is clear that
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price
of Nickel experienced the greatest decline during the period, Use synonyms
while
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Copper
had the least change in its Use synonyms
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To begin
with, in January, the cost of Linking Words
Copper
changed by 6% compared with the preceding month which was more than the other two metals. Use synonyms
However
, its Linking Words
percentage
decreased to only 1% in March and remained the same for the following month. Yet, the changes regarding its Use synonyms
percentage
fell dramatically to -3% by June. Use synonyms
Then
, it rose to -1% in July and stayed steady for 3 months. Linking Words
Moreover
, after a slight fall, it rose significantly from -2% to 1% by November.
Concerning other items, Zink and Linking Words
Copper
accounted for almost the same Use synonyms
percentage
in January, at 1% and 2% respectively. Use synonyms
Although
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price
of Zinc had an upward trend at the beginning, and Use synonyms
Copper
’s cost had a downward one, they became equal in June, at about -1%. Afterwards, Use synonyms
Copper
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price
inclined to 1% for the three next months, whilst Zink’s Use synonyms
percentage
was just below 0%. Use synonyms
Finally
, they were quite similar Linking Words
at the end
of the period, at roughly 2%.Linking Words
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