The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007.
The bar chart compares five different
countries
in terms of the
number
of
magazines
sold per individual in two years 2000 and 2010, with projections for 2020.
It is clear that
while
the
number
of
magazines
sold in
country
D increases, the opposite is true for the other
countries
.
Additionally
, the figure for
country
B
is the largest, as opposed to the lowest figure which can be seen in
country
E. In 2000, a resident in
country
B
sold nearly 50
magazines
,
while
just under 50 units and 40 units were sold by an individual in
countries
A and C respectively.
In contrast
, there were nearly 20
magazines
sold by
country
D, compared to only approximately 6 by
country
E. In 2010, the quantities of
magazines
sold in
countries
A,
B
and C fell slightly,
whereas
the other
countries
saw the opposite trends in their figures. In 2020, it is predicted that the
number
of
magazines
sold in
Country
B
,
Country
C and
Country
E decrease minimally by around 1 each,
while
that of
Country
D will rise by a similar
number
. Meanwhile, there was a considerable fall to under 40 in the figure for
country
A.
Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, number, magazines, country, b with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Increases
  • Decreases
  • Comparison
  • Significant
  • Projected
  • Sales
  • Economy
  • Digital Media
  • Impact
  • Cultural Factors
  • Analysis
  • Future Trends
  • Market Conditions
What to do next:
Look at other essays: