The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how
sugar
is manufactured from Use synonyms
sugar
cane. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is a linear process consisting of four main stages: farming, crushing, separating and drying.
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The first step is
to grow Linking Words
sugar
cane and it takes about 12 to 18 months for it to mature. After it has fully grown, it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves first and Use synonyms
then
chopping the canes, Linking Words
while
the mechanized method uses machines to cut the canes directly.
The harvested canes are Linking Words
then
crushed in a mill to extract the juice, which is later purified using a limestone filter. Linking Words
Next,
the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water, which concentrates it into a syrup. The syrup is Linking Words
then
poured into a centrifuge where it is spun at high speed to separate the Linking Words
sugar
crystals. Use synonyms
Finally
, the crystals are dried and cooled and the end product is Linking Words
sugar
.Use synonyms
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