The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006

The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
The line graph illustrates the
price
of 800 grams of various types of
bread
in a particular European nation over five consecutive years, starting from 2001.
It is clear that
while
the
price
of brown, white and rye
bread
increased, the
price
of
wholegrain
bread
witnessed a wild fluctuation over the period shown.
Additionally
, the figure for brown
bread
saw the biggest change. In 2001, residents in
this
country had to spend 0.8
euros
for 800 grams of
wholegrain
bread
,
while
the other types only cost 0.6
euros
each. In 2002, the
price
of
wholegrain
, brown and white
bread
increased dramatically, with the figure for
wholegrain
bread
reaching a peak of 1.8
euros
,
whereas
the
price
of rye
bread
saw a slight decline. From 2002 to 2005, the figures for rye
bread
and white
bread
both increased considerably to 1.3 and 0.7
euros
respectively,
while
there was a substantial drop of 1 euro in the
price
of
wholegrain
bread
in 2005. Meanwhile, the
price
of brown
bread
fluctuated wildly between 1.4
euros
and 1.6
euros
throughout the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bread, wholegrain, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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