The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
The line graph illustrates the
price
of 800 grams of various types of bread
in a particular European nation over five consecutive years, starting from 2001.
It is clear that
while
the price
of brown, white and rye bread
increased, the price
of wholegrain
bread
witnessed a wild fluctuation over the period shown. Additionally
, the figure for brown bread
saw the biggest change.
In 2001, residents in this
country had to spend 0.8 euros
for 800 grams of wholegrain
bread
, while
the other types only cost 0.6 euros
each. In 2002, the price
of wholegrain
, brown and white bread
increased dramatically, with the figure for wholegrain
bread
reaching a peak of 1.8 euros
, whereas
the price
of rye bread
saw a slight decline.
From 2002 to 2005, the figures for rye bread
and white bread
both increased considerably to 1.3 and 0.7 euros
respectively, while
there was a substantial drop of 1 euro in the price
of wholegrain
bread
in 2005. Meanwhile, the price
of brown bread
fluctuated wildly between 1.4 euros
and 1.6 euros
throughout the period.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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