The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006

The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
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The line graph illustrates the
price
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of 800 grams of various types of
bread
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in a particular European nation over five consecutive years, starting from 2001.
It is clear that
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while
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the
price
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of brown, white and rye
bread
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increased, the
price
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of
wholegrain
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bread
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witnessed a wild fluctuation over the period shown.
Additionally
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, the figure for brown
bread
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saw the biggest change. In 2001, residents in
this
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country had to spend 0.8
euros
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for 800 grams of
wholegrain
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bread
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,
while
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the other types only cost 0.6
euros
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each. In 2002, the
price
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of
wholegrain
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, brown and white
bread
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increased dramatically, with the figure for
wholegrain
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bread
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reaching a peak of 1.8
euros
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,
whereas
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the
price
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of rye
bread
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saw a slight decline. From 2002 to 2005, the figures for rye
bread
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and white
bread
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both increased considerably to 1.3 and 0.7
euros
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respectively,
while
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there was a substantial drop of 1 euro in the
price
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of
wholegrain
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bread
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in 2005. Meanwhile, the
price
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of brown
bread
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fluctuated wildly between 1.4
euros
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and 1.6
euros
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throughout the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bread, wholegrain, euros with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Analyze
  • Price trend
  • Period
  • Increase / Decrease in price
  • Compare
  • Starting prices
  • Shift over time
  • Causes
  • Inflation
  • Cost of wheat
  • Consumer demand
  • Price volatility
  • Types of bread
  • Market trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Euros
  • 800 grams
  • European country
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