The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006
The line graph illustrates the
price
of 800 grams of various types of Use synonyms
bread
in a particular European nation over five consecutive years, starting from 2001.
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It is clear that
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while
the Linking Words
price
of brown, white and rye Use synonyms
bread
increased, the Use synonyms
price
of Use synonyms
wholegrain
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bread
witnessed a wild fluctuation over the period shown. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the figure for brown Linking Words
bread
saw the biggest change.
In 2001, residents in Use synonyms
this
country had to spend 0.8 Linking Words
euros
for 800 grams of Use synonyms
wholegrain
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bread
, Use synonyms
while
the other types only cost 0.6 Linking Words
euros
each. In 2002, the Use synonyms
price
of Use synonyms
wholegrain
, brown and white Use synonyms
bread
increased dramatically, with the figure for Use synonyms
wholegrain
Use synonyms
bread
reaching a peak of 1.8 Use synonyms
euros
, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
price
of rye Use synonyms
bread
saw a slight decline.
From 2002 to 2005, the figures for rye Use synonyms
bread
and white Use synonyms
bread
both increased considerably to 1.3 and 0.7 Use synonyms
euros
respectively, Use synonyms
while
there was a substantial drop of 1 euro in the Linking Words
price
of Use synonyms
wholegrain
Use synonyms
bread
in 2005. Meanwhile, the Use synonyms
price
of brown Use synonyms
bread
fluctuated wildly between 1.4 Use synonyms
euros
and 1.6 Use synonyms
euros
throughout the period.Use synonyms
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