You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house.when you returned home. You discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like , where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

Dear Norah,
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came to you and we had fun together.After ,that
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came to my house and realised that
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left my coat at your house
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am writing
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I will tell you what the leather looks like. The coat is orange in
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and the material is cotton. I thought that
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left
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the sofa and the chair. Before I danced I took off my coat and put it on the chair. I will arrange some date maybe next week to take from you the leather because
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am sure that
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left it at your house.Please tell me that you are available at any date next week. Yours Lovings, Sara
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