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The diagram shows the process of making instant coffee. Write a report of at least 150 words showing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the process of making instant coffee. Write a report of at least 150 words showing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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In order to produce instant coffee, the
beans
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 must undergo a variety of processes including drying, grinding, heating, and cooling.
To begin
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 with, coffee
beans
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 are harvested by hand and
then
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 left out in the sun to dry. Once the
beans
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 are dry, they are roasted in a special oven and
then
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 cooled rapidly.
Next,
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the
beans
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 are ground into a powder which is
then
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 combined with hot water.
Following
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this
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, the mixture is strained and
then
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 the filtered material is frozen. In the subsequent stage, the frozen mixture is ground once more and
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 the granules are dried in a vacuum, which is used in order to completely remove all moisture.
Finally
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, the dried instant coffee powder is packaged into containers and can now be transported to stores for sale.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words beans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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