In the future more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?
A
trip
to own country
would be more people
's choice instead
of travelling to other countries
in future. In point of my view, it will depend on their situation and conditions that will impact their decision.
Actually, having a trip
to a familiar place
such
as my own country
will be more comfortable than other places, that know its language and culture
and also
its rules would be more difficult. On the one hand, if people
tend to travel in their own country
, certainly they could prevent facing more problems, such
as finding a suitable place
to accommodation. even though they can stay for some time at their family home or for instance
, the hotel where they will have the best relationships with a reception to acquire more information about new places, that are unfamiliar to them in the common language. I think, the trip
to own country
has more advantages for people
, that they can alter in their choices of place
for travelling.
On the other hand
, perhaps to repetition place
for some people
would be boring, because of their diversity, especially in acquiring more experience about travelling to a new place
with a new language and culture
or maybe new rules, that it will be so exciting for them. For instance
, the trip
to a variety of countries
has raised people
's awareness about culture
that is not familiar to them. The tradition related to the culture
of countries
is a complicated view, that has roots in their ancient. Hence
, it is an emphasised part of its culture
that stimulates tourists. I think, it can be a strong factor in people
's choice on their trips for going to other countries
, It will be so pleasant for someone.
In conclusion, choices have affected in majority of our happiness in our enjoyable trip
, which one place
is, a foreign country
or our own country
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