The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given line chart provides information on the elderly population in percentages (People aged 65 and over) in three particular areas: the USA, Sweden and
Japan
in the span of one century from 1940 to 2040.
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Overall
, the data depicts an upward trend in those three countries. At the beginning of the period, the USA had the largest population followed by Sweden and Linking Words
Japan
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However
, Linking Words
Japan
replaced that place Use synonyms
at the end
of the period, becoming the most dominant proportion Linking Words
according to
prediction.
In 1940, around 9% elderly population Linking Words
lived
in the USA and Change the form of the verb
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this
gradually increased year by year reaching its peak at 15% in 1980 before decreasing slightly to approximately 14% in 2020. Linking Words
However
, the chart predicts that a sudden increase will happen at about 23% in 2040.
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In contrast
, Sweden experienced a gradual ascend from less than 6% to 25% in 1940 and 2040, respectively. Linking Words
In addition
, between 1980 and 2000, Linking Words
this
category overlapped the USA’s proportion, making it the most dominant before Linking Words
Japan
exceeded it in 2040.Use synonyms
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