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Some people say thhat the only reason for learnig a foreign langua is in order to tavel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In today's world learning a foreign
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 is a very common matter. There are individuals who believe that
people
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 learn foreign languages merely because they need it for travel or working abroad. Opponents of
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 that there are other reasons for
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 to take up foreign
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 lessons.
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 travelling and working abroad are two major reasons
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 knowing a
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 I believe there are other factors that are equally significant. Working abroad or a trip to a foreign
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 are some of the main motifs of
people
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 to learn the
language
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 spoken in another place. First in order to qualify for many jobs companies have policies that make learning a foreign
language
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 a requirement. They need to know that the
person
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 taking the job is going to be capable of communicating with others in various capacities and won't have any difficulty conveying his thoughts through words.
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, an adequate grasp of a
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's
language
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 is undeniably imperative for a traveller who's going to be in that
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.
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 traveller will have to know some of the local languages to get around and enjoy his trip.
On the other hand
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, we should return to the fact that learning a foreign
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 is not only because a
person
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 wants to have fun on his week-long journey to a certain
country
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 or needs a
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 certificate for the human resources department of a company. First of
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 there are hundreds of thousands of young
people
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 who apply for universities in foreign countries every year in the hopes of getting a better education and personal progress. Almost all of these countries have a policy in place to make sure their prospective students know the
language
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 of that
country
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.
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 students usually have to take tests or have interviews with faculty members.
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, almost all universities in English-speaking countries need the scores of an internationally recognized test like the IELTS in order to ensure the applicant’s English is proficient.
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Secondly
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 a
person
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 with no intention of travelling abroad or even a passport can still be in
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need of learning a foreign
language
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. University professors, foreign movie enthusiasts, and journalists are only a few of the groups of
people
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 who need to know a foreign
language
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 so that they can get the best version of what they want. It is thoroughly essential to keep in mind that a translated version of a scientific paper, a Tarantino movie, or the breaking news of an explosion in another
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 will probably be inaccurate incomplete and of course not worth it. In conclusion, it is true that
people
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 need to know the
language
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 of the
country
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 they're travelling to or going to work
at
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in
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.
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, these are not the only
reason
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is
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because a student applying for a firm university or a
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 interested in watching movies will
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 a cool and considerable motivation to learn the
language
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 of another
country
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.
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