The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.

The chart below shows changes in three different areas of crime in manchester city centre from 2003 to 2012.
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The given chart illustrates the changing rates of three different crimes (burglary,
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theft, and robbery) in Newport city centre over a period of nine
years
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between 2003 and 2012. Units are measured in the
number
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of incidents per
crime
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per year.
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, it can clearly be seen that the rates of all
crime
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remained relatively steady throughout the given period, with the exception of burglary.
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,
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burglary had the highest rate of
crime
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at the start, it had been overtaken by
car
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theft by the end of the period. In terms of the
crime
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with the highest
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of cases at the start, the
number
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of burglaries stood at nearly 3500 in 2003. It rose significantly and reached its peak of around 3800 in the following year before gradually declining in the next four
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and
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a trough at approximately 1100. From
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point onwards, the
number
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remained steady until 2012. Regarding the other two areas of
crime
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with lower levels at the beginning, the rates of
car
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theft and robbery started at about 2800 and 600, respectively. In the following two
years
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, the
number
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of
car
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thefts remained relatively stable before plunging to approximately 2000 in 2006,
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it gradually rose with small fluctuations in the following
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and went back to about its original level in the
last
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year. Meanwhile, the rate
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robbery fluctuated very slightly between around 500 and 900, ending at approximately 600.
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