Some people think that sports prepare children for work life while others think they do not. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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generation with

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to pursue their future with no problem ,

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, few others

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idea. I will debate both the concerns and give my opinion in

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essay.

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play a vital role in everybody's

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and I believe it is crucial for

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generation to be more exposed to physical activity in their day-to-day

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.

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will enable children to be more active in their

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without feeling any physical hardships along the way.

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sports

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is a mode through which youngsters can destress from school work and

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teach them stress

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management

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for them in the upcoming days.

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, when a child aims to become a Doctor in the near future and as it requires high physical dedication, the games that they have played during their school days will enable them to work physically even in late hours and walk more without feeling to rest as

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is what

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particular job expects from them.

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,

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and other

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physical activities are considered to be of no use by many parents and other individuals.

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, they think that games will make students feel physically drained in a short period of time and they will not have enough energy throughout the day to do any other school work .

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believe that the lessons that young ones learn from these competitive games can be learnt from other sources in the near future and it will enable youngsters not to concentrate on more educational fields that

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much more importance.

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, when a boy prefers to play for around five hours during the day without studying , it will lead to decreased scores on the exam because he feels drained and

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will not concentrate much on his studies. In conclusion, I believe ,

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an essential part ,

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must educate themselves on how to manage and balance both education

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it . Yet, it is the individual's perspective and their choice

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lessons they want to learn.