The pie charts provided information about the average money spent on households in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.

The pie charts provided information about the average money spent on households in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
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The pie charts illustrate the basic ratio of funds invested in households by
Japan
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and
Malaysia
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during the period of 2010.
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,
it is clear that
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both countries
Japan
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and
Malaysia
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spent very less on Health care and more on other goods and services.
However
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, the percentage of Transport in
Japan
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was double that of
Malaysia
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. In the year 2010, the Housing expenditure of
Malaysia
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was 34% which was 13% higher than
Japan
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's Housing with only 21%.
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, in the case of Transport
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held at top position
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double the percentage of
Malaysia
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with only 10%.
Furthermore
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, the spending on the food sector for both countries had a minimal difference of 3 per cent. Meanwhile,
Japan
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showed great performance in the section of other goods and services with 29 per cent which was 3% extra as compared to
Malaysia
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.
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, the healthcare area was the weak point for both
Japan
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and
Malaysia
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with 6% and 3%.
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