The pie charts below provide some informaion about employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

The pie charts below provide some informaion about employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
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The pie charts illustrate the ratio of the distinct employment sectors acquired by males and females in Great Britain in the year 1992.
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it is clear that
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both genders showed minimal interest in the field of General
labourers
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.
Furthermore
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, most of the women stepped into Clerical or related
jobs
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while
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men
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worked more in Managerial and professional areas.
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, a huge proportion of Other manual
jobs
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are obtained by the male category. In the year 1992, the employment rate in Craft or similar sectors was approximately the same for both males and females with 26% and 27% respectively.
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, the minimal rate of General labourers was 2% and 1% for
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and women. The Other non- manual
jobs
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held a higher ratio for females which was 3% more than the other category with 6%. There was an enormous difference in the employment pattern of Clerical or related
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, for
men
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it was only 6% which was negligible in front of
female
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ratio of 31%.
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, the space in the Other manual department for women was minimal at 3% but
men
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covered 24% of it. The male workers in the Managerial and professional section were at a high extent of 36 per cent as compared to female staff with 29%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words jobs, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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