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Some people think eating meat is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's ,world we can all say that nutrition is one of the most important parts of our diet and with,
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meat
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the meat
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 you can get a
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 of nutrition, and it
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 fills you with energy for the rest of your days. Now let's discuss the advantages of
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consumption
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.
Consumption
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 of
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 is done widely around the world, and
meat
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consumption
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 is pretty common around the whole world. When prepared properly
meat
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 has protein and a
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 of nutritional value, allows the body to gain strength and contributes towards a healthy life cycle. A healthy lifecycle requires a balance of protein, nutrition and vitamins. Talking about the disadvantage of
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consumption
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, one of the major issues are overconsumption of
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 products,
meat
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 has a
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 of fat and
consumption
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 of fat does give you a
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 of cholesterol, which is the major cause of health issues and heart disease. If
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consumption
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 is done at a large rate it causes health issues and makes you lazy.
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