You recently bought a second-hand car from a company that sells used cars, but the car developed some problems. You have phoned, left messages and sent emails, but you have not heard anything from the company that sold you the car. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the problems you have had in contacting the company, and explain your dissatisfaction describe the problems with the car tell the manager what you want him to do

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the car that I had purchased from your company as I am facing so many troubles with it. I tried to contact you through phone calls, emails and messages but there was not any response from you which makes me unhappy.
Moreover
, when I bought the automobile, it was working very smoothly.
However
, after some weeks, it started making weird noises. The gas peddle is not working properly.
Apart from
this
, the engine had
also
started heating up very fast. Sometimes, the gears are
also
stuck in one place.
Additionally
, the petrol reading meter is not working so I am not able to find out whether to fill up the tank. As I am facing a lot of problems with the automobile. So I am requesting you to take back
this
car and give me my money back or just replace
this
car with another automobile
that is
working properly. I am waiting for a response from you. Yours faithfully, Rahul
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