The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.

The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The pie chart depicts the survey results from ONS Institution of primary
reasons
for people to emigrate and immigrate to and from the
UK
in 2007.
Overall
, having a definite job was the most selected
reason
by survey participants for migrating to and from the
UK
.
According to
the Immigration data, the biggest contributor to the main
reasons
for individuals to migrate to the
UK
was a definite job at third-tenths of the total immigrants. Followed by a formal study with more than a quarter of the survey populations.
Moreover
, the other
reasons
which are accompanying and looking for work stood at 15% and 12%, respectively.
Then
, 6% of immigrants did not state any
reason
, and 11% of people moved to the
UK
because of other
reasons
.
Furthermore
, having a definite job was the biggest proportion of
reasons
for migrating from the
UK
at 29%. Looking for work and no
reason
stated were the second and third contributors at 22% and 18%, respectively.
Additionally
, other
reasons
at 14% and to accompany or join people at 13%.
In addition
, only a tiny fraction of emigrants chose formal study as a
reason
for moving from the
UK
.
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