The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where revelant
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The bar charts illustrate the number of graduate and postgraduate
students
who opted for other options other than full-time Use synonyms
work
after completing Use synonyms
the
college in the UK in the year 2008. Correct article usage
apply
Overall
,Linking Words
Further
study was the most chosen option by both Linking Words
while
only Linking Words
few
graduates chose voluntary Change the article
a few
work
post completing Use synonyms
the
college.
Correct article usage
apply
To begin
with, after graduation, 29,665 Linking Words
students
proceeded for Use synonyms
further
study which is approximately twice the number of Linking Words
students
who stayed unemployed. Part-time Use synonyms
work
was the second Use synonyms
popular
option among the graduates with Correct quantifier usage
most popular
17,735
figure. Only 3,500 undergraduates went for voluntary Correct article usage
a 17,735
work
. The popularity of the options stayed the same in both undergraduate and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
.
It is evident that after Use synonyms
post graduation
, the number of Add a hyphen
post-graduation
students
who chose Use synonyms
part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
work
and Use synonyms
further
study was within the range of 2500 to 2800 Linking Words
scholar
. Moving Fix the agreement mistake
scholars
further
,1625 Linking Words
students
did not get the job and only 345 postgraduates selected voluntary activities.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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