The diagram shows how apple is canned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram depicts the manufacture of canned
apples
. Overall
, the entire process involves fourteen steps and consists of three main steps, including the harvesting of apples
, processing and the delivery of products to the customer.
Firstly
, the ripened apples
are handpicked from the orchard and transported to the cannery by trucks. At the cannery, the apples
are washed thoroughly before undergoing a quality control selection. The qualified apples
are then
stored at a cold temperature.
Prior to the procedure of canning, the apples
are graded according to
their weight. They also
need to be peeled and cut into slices before being transferred to the container, followed by the addition of syrup and preservatives. Once the cans have been filled, they are sealed and cooked for the purpose of sterilization. After the final products cool down and are attached with labels, they are stored in a warehouse and ready to be despatched for sale.Submitted by yoyoghurtxd on
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