Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job .On the other hand; other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills are more important. Discuss both views and express your own opinion.

Some people think studying at universities is the only way to get a

high paid

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job.

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some people are of the idea that experienced employees can do the job and there is no need to have

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high level

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education

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.

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essay will discuss both these

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of view and argue in

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of the prior. On the one hand,

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many, education is regarded as a major issue and

goverments

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governments

of the countries are supporting the students in many ways. Studying and researching can bring about many merits.

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graduated students from

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universities are easily accepted

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well known

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companies.

On the other hand

, being experienced is an important factor and it is considered the most important factor. They think the vital key to being successful is having practical

experinces

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experience

experiences

. To them, having a

degree

at

uniersity

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university

is not a vital role.

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CEOs without a university

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can have a famous company.

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the importance of

experence

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experience

can not be neglected.

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, students

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have a

degree

in the same field

of

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their job can do much better. For

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instance

after

graduation

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they can take some courses to be more experienced and

this

may lead to

sucsses

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success

. By way of conclusion, despite the fact that the importance of experiences is emphasized I am of the opinion that having

academic

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degree

can be essential.