Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?

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There were numerous debates about whether developed
countries
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should aid developing
countries
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by giving them prosperity
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as
food
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and
education
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or whether these things are the government’s responsibility of poorer
nations
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to prosper their people. In
this
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particular essay, these issues will be discussed.
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with, the government needs to realize that the reason why a nation becomes a poor nation is commonly because of the
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of facilities
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as
education
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and
food
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sources. To illustrate, the
lack
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of educational facilities means there will be a limitation for the individuals who can participate in
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.
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can impact the
lack
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of intelligent people in building the
nations
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to get better than before.
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, the
lack
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of
food
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sources availability means that their citizens cannot obtain a good quality of life which can add other issues for the nation
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as health. In fact, several wealthy
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have already taken a few actions to help poorer
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. To illustrate, several years ago, Myanmar—Developing
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was helped by Australia—developed
countries
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in the form of
education
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by sending off volunteers to teach them about basic
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such
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as reading and calculating.
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, the USA—Wealthy
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helped South Africa—Poorer
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by sending several boxes of
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and water.
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, to
this
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day, Myanmar and South Africa still developing
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even though those
countries
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already obtained a lot of help from developed
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. To summarize, from my perspective, developed
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are not required to share their prosperity
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developing
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. It is the government's responsibility to look after their people.
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, if poorer
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get help from wealthy
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, it is the government's role to manage the help in building the country.
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, unprivileged
countries
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can be better than before.
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