The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of transportation used to travel and go to work in a city by European citizens during a 40-year period from 1960 to 2000.
Overall
, there were many significant changes during the period. Linking Words
While
the figure for Linking Words
cars
increased over time, Use synonyms
this
number decreased for other types of transport.
It can be clearly observed from the chart that nearly 40% of Linking Words
travelers
preferred to use buses in comparison with only 27% for tubes, 18% for Change the spelling
travellers
trains
, and 7% for Use synonyms
cars
in 1960. After 20 years, Use synonyms
while
the percentage of people using Linking Words
trains
experienced a significant rise to reach a peak of over 25%, there was a dramatic climb to 20% in that of people commuting by car. Use synonyms
However
, the figure for those who travelled by bus and tube witnessed a substantial drop to over 25% and over 20%, respectively.
In the following twenty years, Linking Words
cars
and buses reached the same percentages as tubes and Use synonyms
trains
, at approximately 23% and over 25% respectively. Use synonyms
Then
, the proportion of Linking Words
cars
peaked at roughly 40%, which was over 20% higher than that of tubes in 2000. Use synonyms
By contrast
, Linking Words
trains
considerably declined to over 20%, Use synonyms
whereas
buses hit the lowest point of 15%.Linking Words
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