The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
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The table illustrates the ratio of international travellers from distinct countries in random
years
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of 1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the least world tours were made in the initial
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,
while
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most of the traveller's ratio came from the
last
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period of time.
Furthermore
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, people from the Middle East and Africa held at
last
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position in the count of travellers
whereas
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Europe was the highest country among all. In the
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1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 the international tour made by Africans was almost double that ratio of the Middle East with 9.8,11.3, 13.5, and 15.8 respectively. Meanwhile, the number of European tourists rose by 100 in 1995 to 390.3 and after that continuously increased world travel by approximately 3 and 7 in the
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2000 and 2005.
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, the count of America decreased
at the end
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from 118.2 to 113.2, but it showed wonderful progress during the initial stage with 80.5 to 112.5 from the year 1990 to 1995.
Likewise
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, Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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held a second position in the number of international travellers in the year 2005 with 135.8.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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