Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
Sharing some scientific
research
is good but the information
which is too important and valuable should be shared with limited people
only. In my opinion, some scientific research
information
should be only shared with a
public.
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Share
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Sharing
information
about scientific research
is good. As people
will get more and more information
on scientific research
the knowledge of community
will increase. As Add an article
the community
people
will get information
they can also
give some support as well as
can become helpful. For example
, if the public will get information
about new scientific research
then
public
can encourage Add an article
the public
scienties
by making videos, Correct your spelling
scientists
scientist
song
and much more. Fix the agreement mistake
songs
Thus
, scientific research
information
should be shared with a groups
if it is good for both. From my own knowledge if Correct the article-noun agreement
a group
groups
public
Add an article
the public
will get
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gets
information
then
it will help in development
of the nation.
There Add an article
the development
are
some Change the verb form
is
information
about scientific research
that should be kept in a personal. Sharing information
about new scientific research
is good but it should be limited. However
, there are
some Change the verb form
is
information
which scienties
should keep Correct your spelling
scientists
scientist
it
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apply
in
personal. Change preposition
apply
For example
, in covid
19 scientific Correct your spelling
COVID-19
research
information
shared with public
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the public
had
created a lot Unnecessary verb
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of problem
problem
for the nation and the Fix the agreement mistake
problems
goverment
. Correct your spelling
government
Hence
, scientific research
should be kept in
personal. From Change preposition
apply
own
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my own
experience
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have Change the capitalization
I
experience
that some Wrong verb form
experienced
people
misuse scientific research
information
.
To conclude
, sharing some scientific research
information
is good but some important and valueable
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valuable
information
should be kept in
personal. In my Change preposition
apply
opinion
only limited scientific Add a comma
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research
information
should be kept in
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information
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the public
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