A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
People are becoming more and more superficial as the days pass by. It is true that a man is being evaluated based on his wealth rather than
by
his personality. But, as spirituality is on the rise everywhere, I feel Change preposition
on
the
society is becoming softer and kinder. Correct your spelling
that
Although
I partly agree that people can be negative, on a positive note, I also
think that humanity is growing to be better.
As the world is running towards a more modern and commercialised space, it is forgetting its values. With an increased population shifting to the urban cities in search for
employment, they seem to be leaving behind their traditions and culture. Change preposition
of
For instance
, most of my friends’ parents moved to a city from their native village when they were young and started a family. Now, majority
of my generation struggles with understanding the ways of village folk, basic humanitarian values and traditions. Correct article usage
the majority
Instead
, there’s always a hunger for money and material things like luxury cars, bigger and better houses, etc. In this
competition, one is becoming selfish and is ready to backstab anyone. This
ultimately is leading
to everyone being judged based on their looks and status and not based on an individual’s personality.
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leads
this
kind of negativity on the rise, spiritual leaders are propagating love and kindness all over the world. They are reminding us of our basic values like happiness from little things, being kind to everyone and overall
being a good human being. Take for
example, Bill Gates, who is the world’s richest man. Not only Add the comma(s)
,for
does
he donate most of his wealth and time to the charity, he Wrong verb form
did
also
started a foundation along with
his wife, Matilda Gates to help the needy. If you see, the more successful one is, the kinder they are. Social media has a huge rule
to play in Correct your spelling
role
this
. The society seems to encourage one another to be nicer and be better every day.
To conclude
, the world does look bad sometimes with its materialisation but there’s
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there are
also
a lot of good citizens in it trying to make it a better place to live.Submitted by aishvaryaaishu205 on
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