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In some countries there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

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Recycling has become a worldwide issue requiring more notice and conduction,
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 some countries don’t pay as much attention as they should. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss the possible reasons and potential solutions. Some countries don’t recycle as much as others
due to
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 the lack of recycling infrastructure and environmental
awareness
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First,
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some countries fail to designate an area for recycling facilities. When in public, people have no options
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 recycling with the absence of sufficient recycling bins on the streets, the public utilities or at transportation stations.
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the fewer people receive environmental
education
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, the less likely they are aware of
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 the habit of recycling.
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, during my volunteering in Sri Lanka several years ago, I met some local teenagers who knew little about recycling.
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 was because they were never given
such
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 information and naturally wouldn’t have the idea of converting waste into reusable resources, especially when their primary focus was daily living.(30 min) To tackle the issue, the government can improve the recycling system and raise ecological
awareness
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 through
education
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. First and foremost, it is essential to place recycling bins and trash cans more widely and strategically throughout public areas, providing individuals with the opportunities to recycle alongside disposing of their waste.
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, the government should implement comprehensive ecological
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. By introducing the concepts of environmental preservation and emphasizing the significance of sustainable practices, people can develop eco-consciousness at a young age, leading to an increased
awareness
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 of their surroundings and greater participation in recycling for their daily waste. In conclusion, insufficient recycling often results from poor recycling infrastructure and ecological
awareness
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. And it can only be resolved by a well-improved greenery reuse system and enhanced
education
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