There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. .

It is undeniable that education is definitely essential for people. Nowadays, young generations feel

amount

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a amount

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of

pressure

to be

success

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successful

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academically.

As a consequence

, others admit that non-academic subjects must be removed from the

schools

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school's

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syllabus.

Therefore

, younger can focus on their

academic

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academics

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. In my perspective, I highly disagree that non-academic lessons should be deleted by schools since they have a bunch of positive aspects to be considered.

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examples. First and foremost, non-academic subjects can emphasise

students

'

creativities

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and mood. They will be resourceful to create something

as a result

of learning the lessons. To elucidate

further

, a cookery lesson can be

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a favourite

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for female

students

due to

improving their cooking skills. They will try to make

a delicious food

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delicious food

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by

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with

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a new recipe.

Moreover

, in terms of

sport

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sports

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, male

students

are super excited when there is a

sport

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schedule in their school timetables. It will boost their mood;

as a result

, they

stay

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keep learning after the end of

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the sport

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sport

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session.

Secondly

,

students

got

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pressure

in learning because they do not have suitable strategies to address their learning issues.

In addition

, they

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feel

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stress

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when there is a number of goals which should be achieved by them.

Thy

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They

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will set their standards, or how to gain

those achievement

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that achievement

those achievements

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. In my opinion, when the results are beyond their expectations,

pressure

, stress, and

other negative feeling

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another negative feeling

other negative feelings

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will appear on their minds.

For example

, when facing national exams, younger choose to focus on learning to get higher

score

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scores

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. When they have a problem

during

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while

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studying, they get

distraction

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distracted

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or

pressure

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pressured

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and immediately blame something which is actually not relevant to their study. In conclusion, I believe that non-academic subjects are crucial for pupils as extracurricular activities or

addition

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lessons at schools.

Pressure

does not

goes

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to

this

subject.

Nevertheless

, it appears when

students

get

stress

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stressed

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on

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about

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learning.